tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6382860812635098089.post6675178390856322719..comments2023-06-29T10:39:22.676+01:00Comments on Grey Squirrel - Haiku & Contemporary Haiga: Frank...http://www.blogger.com/profile/02197806933052269135noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6382860812635098089.post-76643282606062318102012-02-16T08:02:49.241+00:002012-02-16T08:02:49.241+00:00Thanks, Carletta...Thanks, Carletta...Frank...https://www.blogger.com/profile/02197806933052269135noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6382860812635098089.post-4345090359330462012-02-16T03:16:43.597+00:002012-02-16T03:16:43.597+00:00Makes me think of warm summer evenings. :)Makes me think of warm summer evenings. :)Carlettahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11178161514195582965noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6382860812635098089.post-76225613667402346192012-02-14T12:43:39.136+00:002012-02-14T12:43:39.136+00:00Thanks, Dave...Thanks, Dave...Frank...https://www.blogger.com/profile/02197806933052269135noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6382860812635098089.post-87967206205309550342012-02-14T12:39:21.018+00:002012-02-14T12:39:21.018+00:00Nice one, FrankNice one, FrankDave Serjeanthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06479441346697423799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6382860812635098089.post-40132198541352783162012-02-14T11:07:12.767+00:002012-02-14T11:07:12.767+00:00Thanks, Sam...Thanks, Sam...Frank...https://www.blogger.com/profile/02197806933052269135noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6382860812635098089.post-15445386678904838442012-02-14T10:41:33.564+00:002012-02-14T10:41:33.564+00:00Nicely said..Nice blog..:))
Sam..Nicely said..Nice blog..:))<br /><br />Sam..Sam!!https://www.blogger.com/profile/13380920968978656414noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6382860812635098089.post-90584594864815922012-02-13T09:33:27.627+00:002012-02-13T09:33:27.627+00:00Thanks, Bill. I think your version is better.Thanks, Bill. I think your version is better.Frank...https://www.blogger.com/profile/02197806933052269135noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6382860812635098089.post-902416910393963162012-02-13T02:38:26.815+00:002012-02-13T02:38:26.815+00:00Try it without "seems"
almost twilight ...Try it without "seems"<br /><br />almost twilight . . .<br />the setting sun cuts<br />a roof in half<br /><br />I think it works that wayBillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10717622168200846486noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6382860812635098089.post-86301230878642828722012-02-12T16:48:58.326+00:002012-02-12T16:48:58.326+00:00Thanks, Magyar...Thanks, Magyar...Frank...https://www.blogger.com/profile/02197806933052269135noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6382860812635098089.post-75237227118950797152012-02-12T16:39:50.095+00:002012-02-12T16:39:50.095+00:00__I see that line, the cut of the sunset knife... ...__I see that line, the cut of the sunset knife... half the roof in night-fall, and half... still in the day; such a common sight, but you have made so notable... here, and that, the core of good haiku.<br />__Lovit. _mMagyarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14834296565844877410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6382860812635098089.post-89163642682249996182012-02-12T10:47:53.733+00:002012-02-12T10:47:53.733+00:00Thanks, Sandy...Thanks, Sandy...Frank...https://www.blogger.com/profile/02197806933052269135noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6382860812635098089.post-1224595539736324812012-02-11T22:09:32.783+00:002012-02-11T22:09:32.783+00:00I was just out shooting our sunset, and it did exa...I was just out shooting our sunset, and it did exactly that!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com