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Tuesday, 11 August 2009

rustle of trees…
in the river’s current
a flotilla of leaves

19 comments:

Devika said...

so eloquent, i love the scene it presents, Frank :)

wishes,
devika

Dalloway said...

lovely haiku Frank... (where have your haiga gone?)

Frank Williams said...

Hi Emma,

I'm having problems with my PC so can't post photos at the moment. Hope to be up and running soon.

Cheers, Frank...

Lorraine said...

so beautiful, it has all of the most beautiful elements, yep it's elemental, i love it, I hear its song, so lovely Frank

Cindybrown said...

Very nice Frank!!

T.Migratorius said...

I like the use of the word flotilla, Frank. Nice.

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

it's that time of year...

John McDonald said...

good one Frank

Carletta said...

Your words paint a crisp fall day for me with a cool wind blowing. :)
Lovely.

Paul Smith said...

'rustle of trees...' Stays with me as I head off down the river. Great poem!

RBroeker said...

Where does the battle start? Good one, Frank.

Best wishes
Ralf

Inside our hands, outside our hearts said...

Lovely. I was thinking when Autumn brings its cool breeze. How it captures us... cooling us down and warming us at the same. It is like a slow moving streem that offers you a glance at the coming season.
Very nice indeed.

T

Inside our hands, outside our hearts said...

Lovely, a superb image has been left with me.

T

Kristin Riggs said...

I love that rustling sound...I can hear it. :) Wonderful!

Laure said...

such sound and movement ... great wordpaint, Frank.

Rudi Pfaller said...

Interesting composition
Rudi

Magyar said...

...and one wonders, to where are the leaves headed. Well done. _m

Janice Thomson said...

Wonderful contrast with the use of 'flotilla'. A most enjoyable haiku Frank.

GABRIELA said...

Beautiful image made of words!