One can feel the movement and noise in the background of your words. Love this one Frank.Neat photo as well.
not to mention the bonks of my head on the glass as the train ambles along. Nice one
I love trains, I love this Haiga, so very much ;)
... dozing between the lurches, the rumble softens. __Good one Frank! _m
captures that powerful sensation when you close your eyes and sudenly the world enters your head
I love trains! This is lovely...I can just hear it. We have a train that you can board here in my hometown and ride North through the mountains...it's so beautiful in the fall! This makes me want to ride it very soon!
great image Frank
Lovely. Just like Janice.
Janice is absolutely right. The movement in the verse is present, the shutdown is visible. Like it.Best wishesRalf
Lovely!Your words remind me when I was in college and riding the bus home - head against window, eyes closed and listening, pretending to be asleep.Love the photo!
Frank, you have another winning train haiku, and you know how much I adore your train and train related haiku! ;-)Alanwww.withwords.org.uk
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