Let me try again, my last comment didn't survive....what a feeling: replete and slightly awake lol
I'm not quite awake this morning myself Frank as I sit here and watch it snow in 18 degree weather."A Mouse Spills Out" - the teacher in me sees a great title for a kids book and your words portray a wonderful image for the cover. :)
Enjoying what I see here.
The first line works all the way to the last.
Love it! :) I can relate, too...My mind is alive at night. Sometimes I don't think I'm quite awake until 11:00 or noon...ha ha!!!
__Perhaps the mouse isn't quite awake; startled as the litter bin is up-set, it clumsily dives into nothingness. __Good writing offers many different views. _m
Excellent Frank, I'm still smiling!
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