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Saturday, 30 January 2010

not quite awake
from a full litter bin
a mouse spills out

8 comments:

Lorraine said...

Let me try again, my last comment didn't survive....what a feeling: replete and slightly awake lol

Carletta said...

I'm not quite awake this morning myself Frank as I sit here and watch it snow in 18 degree weather.
"A Mouse Spills Out" - the teacher in me sees a great title for a kids book and your words portray a wonderful image for the cover. :)

Timoteo said...

Enjoying what I see here.

Bill said...

The first line works all the way to the last.

Emma Dalloway said...

really?

Kristin Riggs said...

Love it! :) I can relate, too...My mind is alive at night. Sometimes I don't think I'm quite awake until 11:00 or noon...ha ha!!!

Magyar said...

__Perhaps the mouse isn't quite awake; startled as the litter bin is up-set, it clumsily dives into nothingness.
__Good writing offers many different views. _m

Paul Smith said...

Excellent Frank, I'm still smiling!