fire and water
whoa, there is so much in this, I feel it, it's fantastic
another beauty Frank
Good writing and judgement on where each line is placed. Excellent haiku! Nice photo too, and glad it isn't of a goldfish bowl, but of carp in the wild: very thoughtful.AlanLiterature Director, 2010 Bath Japanese Festival.
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fire and water
whoa, there is so much in this, I feel it, it's fantastic
another beauty Frank
Good writing and judgement on where each line is placed. Excellent haiku! Nice photo too, and glad it isn't of a goldfish bowl, but of carp in the wild: very thoughtful.
Alan
Literature Director,
2010 Bath Japanese Festival
.
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