How silentlymusical, I love how you put your words together, always
A strong image. I'm not sure you need "of rain" after "drizzle."
I like this a lot. The sound of the words goes together with their meaning.Best wishesRalf
Thank you Loraine, Ralf and Bill for your comments. Bill, have taken on board your comment regarding rain/drizzle and have changed the first line slightly. Thanks...
Delightful images come to mind when reading this.
Beautiful image Frank, timeless...
__That that needn't be said: that union between the mare and her foal._m
Yes Frank, lovely imagery!
Beautiful, I have a mare and foal in my pasture. They are such beautiful creatures. Well said Frank..
This is a painting, an image of tranquility, of devotion, of acceptance. Lovely.Adelaide
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How silentlymusical, I love how you put your words together, always
A strong image. I'm not sure you need "of rain" after "drizzle."
I like this a lot. The sound of the words goes together with their meaning.
Best wishes
Ralf
Thank you Loraine, Ralf and Bill for your comments. Bill, have taken on board your comment regarding rain/drizzle and have changed the first line slightly. Thanks...
Delightful images come to mind when reading this.
Beautiful image Frank, timeless...
__That that needn't be said: that union between the mare and her foal.
_m
Yes Frank, lovely imagery!
Beautiful, I have a mare and foal in my pasture. They are such beautiful creatures. Well said Frank..
This is a painting, an image of tranquility, of devotion, of acceptance. Lovely.
Adelaide
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