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Thursday, 14 October 2010

slowly the rain
peters out—birds flapping
at my window

6 comments:

Magyar said...

__Often the rain's noise receeds so slowley, we have to check... to be sure. Well shown, Frank! _m

Lorraine said...

I can hear them,they're saying hey bud, no rain come out to play lol :)

John McDonald said...

love it frank
john

Devika said...

Good haiku, Frank :)

wishes,
devika

Kristin Riggs said...

This paints a pleasant image. I like it a lot! :)

Ralf Bröker said...

Melancholic, but full of life. "To peter out" was new for me.

Best wishes
Ralf