Friday, 12 November 2010

stillness then wind
slowly the trees
begin to whoosh


Henrique Pimenta said...

Início da vida.

Boa imagem e sensação tátil.

Lorraine said...

my favourite song in the whole world, it's beautiful Frank :)

Devika Jyothi said...

nice haiga...and very fine choice of words, Frank :)


John McDonald said...

good one Frank

Magyar said...

The quickness of change, so well put Frank. _m

Kristin Riggs said...

I can hear it! I love this. :)

Dave Serjeant said...

nice one Frank

Janice Thomson said...

Well caught Frank - like this.

Area 17 said...

I love those last two lines, particularly the last one. Very evocative and atmospheric.

all my very best

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