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Monday 15 August 2011

dark rain...
the day bounces back
with a burst of sunlight

9 comments:

Anonymous said...

Ah yes, a day with a bonus!

Magyar said...

A soft dark rain calms my mind... as did your haiku, Frank. _m

Carletta said...

You described my day here perfectly! :)

Lorraine said...

Wow that is exactly what it does, how amazingly described, bravo Frank :)

Adelaide said...

You got it just as it happens.

Adelaide

Paul Smith said...

Perfect 'Frank at his very best'...

Anonymous said...

I like the use of metaphor:
the day bounces back.

That proves your great haiku technique.

Best wishes
Rudi

John McDonald said...

great stuff Frank - been trying for days to get through on your comments I'm trying something hope I make it this time

Frank... said...

Dear All

Thank you all for your kind comments.

Best, Frank...