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Friday, 7 September 2012

screech of seagulls...
their reflections colliding
in the mirror sea

8 comments:

Lorraine said...

I'm in awe gosh I Love this I'm an ocean and everything about it/lover so thank you

Frank... said...

Thanks for your visit, Lorraine...

Bill said...

Great moment, Frank. I wonder if "mirror" is already implicit in "reflections." And you might try it without "their."

Iris said...

Very nice haiku, Frank.
I like birds and water, I live in Warsaw just at the lake side (I have already mentioned this on your blog :) Gulls are here in big qty. I like to observe them colliding :)
Best regards
Iris

Frank... said...

Thanks for your visit, Bill. Also thanks for your suggestions re amendment of my haiku, which I will some thought to...

Frank... said...

Thanks for your visit, Iris...

Adelaide said...

A great image, Frank.

Adelaide

Frank... said...

Thanks for your visit, Adelaide...