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Friday, 22 March 2013

dream-like state...
butterflies' flimsy flight
across the carpet

12 comments:

Bill said...

I like that second line. I wonder if something like "half-dozing" would work in line 1.

Frank... said...

Thanks for visiting & commenting, Bill. I'll give your suggestion for line 1 some thought...

Gillena Cox said...

like the sleepy mood; even just "dozing" can work for L1


much love...

Lorraine said...

how beautiful that awkward state of awakening, wow

Frank... said...

Thanks for visiting & commenting, Gillena...

Frank... said...

Thanks for visiting & commenting, Lorraine...

Janice Thomson said...

There's a fly like that here trying to wake up for Spring - alas still a foot of snow...much enjoyed Frank.

Frank... said...

No snow here fortunately, but the rest of the UK has had quite lot - not very spring-like at the moment! Pleased to see that your are posting again. Thanks for visiting & commenting, Janice...

Magyar said...

a butterfly
to trust the changing winds
chance

Frank... said...

Thanks for visiting & your lovely haiku, Magyar...

Adelaide said...

dozing for L1 or half-asleep?
A spring feeling, but not here in a good part of the US.

Adelaide

Frank... said...

Thanks for visiting & commenting, Adelaide...