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Sunday, 16 November 2014

again delayed
the train window’s raindrops
slowly disappear

6 comments:

Adelaide said...

I can see it and feel the impatience of the wait.

Adelaide

Frank... said...

Thanks for dropping by & commenting, Adelaide...

Lorraine Renaud said...

gosh late enough for you to get soaked...then the rain stopped isn't it always the way Frank? love this :)

Frank... said...

Thanks for dropping by & commenting, Lorraine...

Alan Summers said...

Excellent train haiku!

kind regards,

Alan
Area 17 blog weblink: Alan's haiku blog

Frank... said...

Thanks for dropping by & commenting, Alan...