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Tuesday, 15 December 2015

from the train...
through thick fog a drift
of birds on the wing

4 comments:

Adelaide said...

Hi Frank,

I can't explain it adequately, but I see this as a metaphor for life.

Adelaide

Frank... said...

Hi Adelaide

The wonderful thing about haiku is that your interpretation is as valid as the writer. Thanks for dropping by.

Frank...

Alan Summers said...

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from the train...
through thick fog a drift
of birds on the wing

Frank Williams
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Wonderful! And I hope to see you more now that I live just off the London Paddington train line. Our Chippenham train station cafe is fun and friendly, a great place to meet you, and walk to the Wood Lane Writers Centre, where you can have a haiku placed! :-)

warm regards,

Alan

Frank... said...

Hi Alan, thanks for dropping by & leaving your various kind comments. Best wishes, Frank...