Grey Squirrel - Haiku & Contemporary Haiga

Saturday, 7 March 2009

steady rain
a crow flies slow and low
across the empty road

2 comments:

jem said...: The 'slow and low' of the middle line works so well, it has a sound that suits and emphasises the scene.; 8 March 2009 at 11:31
Frank... said...: Thanks for your kind comments jem...; 8 March 2009 at 12:02

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