Love the sweet imagery Frank... and wish there was any kind of a green leaf here...sigh.
my kind of Haigu, to hte point, beautifully
I like this, Frank. I do think line 1 could do more for you.
I've been watching the birds out my window today and I think they would enjoy having a few leaves to knock around. :)Lovely Frank!
A bird settles. now the leaf flys, I sense that change there Frank. Nice. _m
Your use of "knock" changes this little scene into an act of power. Good one, Frank.Best wishesRalf
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Love the sweet imagery Frank... and wish there was any kind of a green leaf here...sigh.
my kind of Haigu, to hte point, beautifully
I like this, Frank. I do think line 1 could do more for you.
I've been watching the birds out my window today and I think they would enjoy having a few leaves to knock around. :)
Lovely Frank!
A bird settles. now the leaf flys, I sense that change there Frank. Nice. _m
Your use of "knock" changes this little scene into an act of power. Good one, Frank.
Best wishes
Ralf
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gostei mesmo
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