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Saturday, 30 April 2011

twilight—a loose leaf
at the twig’s end
twirls in the wind

4 comments:

Lorraine said...

and flows into eternity, I love this so much Frank

Devika said...

Very perceptive haiku, Frank :)

wishes,
devika

Warren said...

I love the image this creates - and think the hyphen and where it's placed in L1 is a stroke of genius. It creates a bit of tension as the night encroaches.

Warren

Carletta said...

Yes, it does....
I smile at having that memory.