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Thursday, 7 April 2011

census day—for a moment
three geese fly parallel
                     with our train

7 comments:

Lorraine said...

laughing at us lol i love this I'm chuckling

Rudi Pfaller said...

I like the fine irony. Count the geese for census if you want. It doesn't matter.
Best wishes
Rudi

Paul Smith said...

'We're all in it together'... I love this Frank.

Carletta said...

Loved Rudi's comment.
Very nice as always Frank. :)

Janice Thomson said...

What a splendid image with its sarcastic touch of humor. Excellent Frank!

Bill said...

Just a suggestion

census day –
three geese parallel
with our train

Haiku implies a moment, and fly is the default mode of geese. Good moment.

Frank... said...

Bill: thanks for your suggestion, which I give some thouyght too...