I'm envisioning an opening to a scary movie. :)On the other hand could be some fisherman out for an early morning catch....Lovely verse Frank!
lovely sets frankjohn
That would make a nice setting for a movie.I am looking out at fog right now. Maybe it will inspire me.
Picking up on the movie connection, a slight rearrangement:river at dawn –a boat chuggingout of the foggives you a last line that is also the title of a John Garfield movie.This does have that kind of cinematic quality.
I like your haiku -in the morning fog-. _m
I would love to take that photo :)
Thank you all for your comments and observations...
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