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Wednesday, 1 February 2012


the river at dawn—
chugging through white fog
several boats      

7 comments:

Carletta said...

I'm envisioning an opening to a scary movie. :)
On the other hand could be some fisherman out for an early morning catch....
Lovely verse Frank!

John McDonald said...

lovely sets frank
john

sandy said...

That would make a nice setting for a movie.
I am looking out at fog right now. Maybe it will inspire me.

Bill said...

Picking up on the movie connection, a slight rearrangement:

river at dawn –
a boat chugging
out of the fog

gives you a last line that is also the title of a John Garfield movie.

This does have that kind of cinematic quality.

Magyar said...

I like your haiku -in the morning fog-. _m

Lorraine said...

I would love to take that photo :)

Frank... said...

Thank you all for your comments and observations...