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Saturday, 11 February 2012


almost twilight...
the setting sun
cuts a roof in half

12 comments:

sandy said...

I was just out shooting our sunset, and it did exactly that!

Frank... said...

Thanks, Sandy...

Magyar said...

__I see that line, the cut of the sunset knife... half the roof in night-fall, and half... still in the day; such a common sight, but you have made so notable... here, and that, the core of good haiku.
__Lovit. _m

Frank... said...

Thanks, Magyar...

Bill said...

Try it without "seems"

almost twilight . . .
the setting sun cuts
a roof in half

I think it works that way

Frank... said...

Thanks, Bill. I think your version is better.

Sam!! said...

Nicely said..Nice blog..:))

Sam..

Frank... said...

Thanks, Sam...

Dave Serjeant said...

Nice one, Frank

Frank... said...

Thanks, Dave...

Carletta said...

Makes me think of warm summer evenings. :)

Frank... said...

Thanks, Carletta...