Grey Squirrel - Haiku & Contemporary Haiga

Saturday, 11 February 2012

almost twilight...

the setting sun

cuts a roof in half

Anonymous said...: I was just out shooting our sunset, and it did exactly that!; 11 February 2012 at 22:09
Frank... said...: Thanks, Sandy...; 12 February 2012 at 10:47
Magyar said...: __I see that line, the cut of the sunset knife... half the roof in night-fall, and half... still in the day; such a common sight, but you have made so notable... here, and that, the core of good haiku.
__Lovit. _m; 12 February 2012 at 16:39
Frank... said...: Thanks, Magyar...; 12 February 2012 at 16:48
Bill said...: Try it without "seems"

almost twilight . . .
the setting sun cuts
a roof in half

I think it works that way; 13 February 2012 at 02:38
Frank... said...: Thanks, Bill. I think your version is better.; 13 February 2012 at 09:33
Sam!! said...: Nicely said..Nice blog..:))

Sam..; 14 February 2012 at 10:41
Frank... said...: Thanks, Sam...; 14 February 2012 at 11:07
Dave Serjeant said...: Nice one, Frank; 14 February 2012 at 12:39
Frank... said...: Thanks, Dave...; 14 February 2012 at 12:43
Carletta said...: Makes me think of warm summer evenings. :); 16 February 2012 at 03:16
Frank... said...: Thanks, Carletta...; 16 February 2012 at 08:02