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Friday, 22 June 2012


thru my window—each day
another yellow flower
on the unknown plant 
                 or
each new day...
another yellow flower
on the unknown plant 


12 comments:

Iris said...

still unknown plants give us a variety :)
I like this interesting haiku.

Frank... said...

Thanks for stopping by Iris...

Carletta said...

Unknown but all the beautiful just the same. :)

Gillena Cox said...

i prefer TAKE 2; but without 'ON THE' and placing the cutter at LINE2 instead of 1

each new day
another yellow flower -
unknown plant


much love...

Adelaide said...

The 2nd one reads more smoothly.

Could be a weed, but if it's pretty, keep it.

Adelaide

Frank... said...

Thanks for stopping by Gillena. Also thanks for revised version, which I will give serious thought to...

Frank... said...

Thanks for stopping by Adelaide...

Lorraine said...

Each day
Each new day
Forever :)

Frank... said...

Thanks for stopping by Lorraine...

Rita Odeh said...

unknown plant-
another yellow flower
each day

A remarkable haiku, Frank. Enjoyed reading.

Frank... said...

Thanks for stopping by Rita...

Alan Summers said...

Second one as is. Weeds [sic] are wildflowers, and I bet it was a beauty and useful to both aspects of nature including us humans.

Alan