Grey Squirrel - Haiku & Contemporary Haiga

Friday, 22 June 2012

thru my window—each day

another yellow flower

on the unknown plant

or
each new day...

another yellow flower

on the unknown plant

Iris said...: still unknown plants give us a variety :)
I like this interesting haiku.; 22 June 2012 at 20:26
Frank... said...: Thanks for stopping by Iris...; 22 June 2012 at 22:04
Carletta said...: Unknown but all the beautiful just the same. :); 23 June 2012 at 03:42
Gillena Cox said...: i prefer TAKE 2; but without 'ON THE' and placing the cutter at LINE2 instead of 1

each new day
another yellow flower -
unknown plant

much love...; 23 June 2012 at 13:49
Adelaide said...: The 2nd one reads more smoothly.

Could be a weed, but if it's pretty, keep it.

Adelaide; 23 June 2012 at 14:04
Frank... said...: Thanks for stopping by Gillena. Also thanks for revised version, which I will give serious thought to...; 23 June 2012 at 16:50
Frank... said...: Thanks for stopping by Adelaide...; 23 June 2012 at 16:50
Lorraine said...: Each day
Each new day
Forever :); 24 June 2012 at 12:57
Frank... said...: Thanks for stopping by Lorraine...; 24 June 2012 at 14:11
Rita Odeh said...: unknown plant-
another yellow flower
each day

A remarkable haiku, Frank. Enjoyed reading.; 18 July 2012 at 12:50
Frank... said...: Thanks for stopping by Rita...; 18 July 2012 at 16:53
Area 17 said...: Second one as is. Weeds [sic] are wildflowers, and I bet it was a beauty and useful to both aspects of nature including us humans.

Alan; 19 July 2012 at 23:54