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Monday, 20 August 2012

second day in a row...
a downy white feather
clinging to the footpath

12 comments:

Gillena Cox said...

Line1 sets the stage nicely; Line3 carries the thought well


much love...

Frank... said...

Thanks for your visit, Gillena...

John McDonald said...

I agree with Gillena
john

Frank... said...

Thanks for your visit, John...

Bill said...

Yes, line 1 makes all the difference.

Iris said...

Frank, for me this haiku is delightful :) So soft like ... a feather :)
Best regards
Iris

Frank... said...

Thanks for your visit, Bill...

Frank... said...

Thanks for your visit, Iris...

Adelaide said...

Frank...

This one and the Sat. haiku are both full of imagery and meaning.

Adelaide

Frank... said...

Thanks for your visit, Adelaide...

Lorraine said...

It is delightful and beautiful, thank you

Frank... said...

Thanks for your visit, Lorraine...