Grey Squirrel - Haiku & Contemporary Haiga

Monday, 20 August 2012

second day in a row...

a downy white feather

clinging to the footpath

Gillena Cox said...: Line1 sets the stage nicely; Line3 carries the thought well

much love...; 21 August 2012 at 12:57
Frank... said...: Thanks for your visit, Gillena...; 21 August 2012 at 13:41
John McDonald said...: I agree with Gillena
john; 21 August 2012 at 14:26
Frank... said...: Thanks for your visit, John...; 21 August 2012 at 14:29
Bill said...: Yes, line 1 makes all the difference.; 21 August 2012 at 19:56
Iris said...: Frank, for me this haiku is delightful :) So soft like ... a feather :)
Best regards
Iris; 21 August 2012 at 20:21
Frank... said...: Thanks for your visit, Bill...; 21 August 2012 at 22:32
Frank... said...: Thanks for your visit, Iris...; 21 August 2012 at 22:33
Adelaide said...: Frank...

This one and the Sat. haiku are both full of imagery and meaning.

Adelaide; 22 August 2012 at 13:36
Frank... said...: Thanks for your visit, Adelaide...; 22 August 2012 at 14:02
Out of Sight L said...: It is delightful and beautiful, thank you; 23 August 2012 at 13:06
Frank... said...: Thanks for your visit, Lorraine...; 23 August 2012 at 15:55