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Sunday, 3 February 2013

among the petals 
on the path
an empty snail shell

8 comments:

Lorraine said...

stunning imagery really you have petals, it's beautiful, we have mountains...of snow

Frank... said...

This poem was written in spring, Lorraine. Thanks for your visit...

Bill said...

How `bout

among the petals
on the path
an empty snail shell

?
Good one, anyway

Frank... said...

Thanks for your visit, Bill. I like your version and have have made the changes you suggested...

Magyar said...

... it whistles in the breeze.

Frank... said...

Thanks for your visit, Magyar...

Dave Serjeant said...

the detritus of life in miniature... love it

Frank... said...

Thanks for your visit, Dave...