Grey Squirrel - Haiku & Contemporary Haiga

Sunday, 3 February 2013

among the petals
on the path

an empty snail shell

Out of Sight L said...: stunning imagery really you have petals, it's beautiful, we have mountains...of snow; 4 February 2013 at 16:33
Frank... said...: This poem was written in spring, Lorraine. Thanks for your visit...; 4 February 2013 at 17:35
Bill said...: How `bout

among the petals
on the path
an empty snail shell

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Good one, anyway; 5 February 2013 at 17:13
Frank... said...: Thanks for your visit, Bill. I like your version and have have made the changes you suggested...; 5 February 2013 at 20:01
Magyar said...: ... it whistles in the breeze.; 6 February 2013 at 02:18
Frank... said...: Thanks for your visit, Magyar...; 6 February 2013 at 02:20
Dave Serjeant said...: the detritus of life in miniature... love it; 6 February 2013 at 13:44
Frank... said...: Thanks for your visit, Dave...; 6 February 2013 at 14:37