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Thursday, 6 June 2013

counting sheep—
before dawn breaks a burst
of blackbird song

8 comments:

Lorraine said...

beautiful I finally know what it is to have silence and a bird whistle before what you wrote were images now they're felt and I love it

Frank... said...

Thanks Lorraine for your visit & kind comments...

Gillena Cox said...

excellent word choice your 'burst'; i can totally identify with your poem

much love...

Frank... said...

Thanks Gillena for your visit & kind comments...

Rudi Pfaller said...

After a sleepless night a blackbird's song puts things right.

Well done!
Rudi

Frank... said...

Thanks Rudi for your visit & kind comments...

Magyar said...

__The blackbirds calling at the end of a sleepless night.
__Well seen, Frank.

Frank... said...

Thanks Magyar for your visit & kind comments...