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Sunday, 23 June 2013

entering the station...
fused to the shiny rails 
the last of the sun 

12 comments:

Bill said...

A strong visual ku.

Lorraine said...

I love sparkles, thank you Frank :)

Frank... said...

Thanks for dropping by Bill...

Frank... said...

Thanks for dropping by Lorraine...

Gillena Cox said...

this evokes a vivid image for me; i am absorbed into your haiku

much love...

Adelaide said...

I can easily visualize the sharp reflections.

Adelaide

Frank... said...

Thanks for dropping by Gillena

Frank... said...

Thanks for dropping by Adelaide...

Gillena Cox said...

lovely image; a happy Sunday to you


much love...

Frank... said...

Thanks for dropping by Gillena...

Magyar said...

on glowing rails
this train follows the sun-set
atlas shrugged

Nice, Frank!
__Sorry for leaving this senryu echo, but Reardon Metal simply came into my simple mind. _m

Frank... said...

Thanks for dropping by and leaving your comment & poem, Magyar...