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Thursday, 23 January 2014

between rail lines...
two pigeons peck
at everything

8 comments:

Lorraine Renaud said...

fantastic photo Frank do tell me they will take the baby away from the rails, geesh
what a photo! I love it, do more

Frank... said...

Thanks for dropping by and commenting, Lorraine. Everyone is sake...

Magyar said...

pigeons in the rain
on this pier-side hand rail
reflections

I like the pick-up of the third. Nice. _m

jem said...

Well handled. Showing their activity without trying to ascribe human feeling to it.

Frank... said...

Thanks for dropping by and commenting, Magyar - and also thanks for your fine haiku...

Frank... said...

Thanks for dropping by and commenting, jem...

Adelaide said...

If I may, I would suggest for L2

two pigeons peck

For me, the "seems to" weakens the haiku.

Great photo. Is that a baby pigeon on the edge?

Adelaide-

Frank... said...

You're right, I will take out 'them'. To be honest, I'm not sure if it's a baby pigeon on the edge. Thanks for dropping by and commenting, Adelaide...