Grey Squirrel - Haiku & Contemporary Haiga

Thursday 23 January 2014

between rail lines...

two pigeons peck

at everything

Out of Sight L said...: fantastic photo Frank do tell me they will take the baby away from the rails, geesh
what a photo! I love it, do more; 23 January 2014 at 13:36
Frank... said...: Thanks for dropping by and commenting, Lorraine. Everyone is sake...; 23 January 2014 at 14:42
Magyar said...: pigeons in the rain
on this pier-side hand rail
reflections

I like the pick-up of the third. Nice. _m; 24 January 2014 at 00:43
jem said...: Well handled. Showing their activity without trying to ascribe human feeling to it.; 24 January 2014 at 10:26
Frank... said...: Thanks for dropping by and commenting, Magyar - and also thanks for your fine haiku...; 24 January 2014 at 13:27
Frank... said...: Thanks for dropping by and commenting, jem...; 24 January 2014 at 13:27
Adelaide said...: If I may, I would suggest for L2

two pigeons peck

For me, the "seems to" weakens the haiku.

Great photo. Is that a baby pigeon on the edge?

Adelaide-; 25 January 2014 at 15:06
Frank... said...: You're right, I will take out 'them'. To be honest, I'm not sure if it's a baby pigeon on the edge. Thanks for dropping by and commenting, Adelaide...; 26 January 2014 at 05:18