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Saturday, 15 March 2014

noisy bus ride
at each twist and turn
a full day moon

12 comments:

Gillena Cox said...

luv, it how easily i'm absorbed into this very vivid scene


much love...

Lorraine Renaud said...

sorry about the noise now as I see it a full day moon would be magical but I feel that the moon referred to isn't too pleasant...have you noticed how low jeans are now....a little Sunday Joke well that's what I got sorry if it's not your intention dear Frank

Frank... said...

Thanks for dropping by & commenting Gillena...

Frank... said...

Thanks for dropping by & commenting Lorraine. Indeed the moon was magical, a distraction from the noise on the bus. Each turn the bus made, I saw a wonderful big moon...

Lorraine Renaud said...

oh really that is magical, wonderful

Frank... said...

Thanks for revisiting, Lorraine...

Bill said...

The surprise of the last line nicely catches the moment.

Frank... said...

Thanks for dropping by & commenting Bill...

Adelaide said...

A lovely distraction to the noise.

Adelaide

Frank... said...

Thanks for dropping by & commenting Adelaide...

Gina said...

And it works both ways, in reading .... The moon as distraction or the noise distracting from that lovely moon ... It's nice as the reader can engage fully depending on their state of mind when reading.

And of course it's the reader's engagement that gives life to a poem or painting. Enjoyed musing on this one. .... Gina

Frank... said...

Thanks for dropping by & leaving your lovely comment Gina...