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Tuesday, 18 March 2014

full moon—a mind-fox
  enters the shadows
     a cat slowly exits

12 comments:

Bill said...

Intriguing, but I don't really get "mind-fox."

Frank... said...

Thanks for dropping by & commenting Bill...

Lorraine Renaud said...

Cats are so very intuitive they know when it's time to leave, bravo Frank

Magyar said...

A thought... can cause caution. _m

Frank... said...

Thanks for dropping by & commenting Lorraine...

Frank... said...

Thanks for dropping by & commenting Magyar...

Gillena Cox said...

I mused over "mind fox" , it it something imagined?

Much love...

Frank... said...

Thanks for dropping by Gillena. Your observation is spot on...

Alan Summers said...

mind-fox, very Ted Hughes.

Ted's was a meta-poem, did you have the same idea?

Alan

Frank... said...

Thanks for dropping by & commenting Alan. A friend told me recently that my haiku was very Ted Hughes but when I wrote it I wasn’t consciously aware of the connection. Our minds can sometimes play tricks on us and creatures etc. can appear to metamorphose before our eyes. Maybe there is a bit of the meta-poet in all haiku poets?

for a moment
the rolling leaf
was a squirrel

Frank...

Gillena Cox said...

Thanks Frank happy i understood it correctly

Aha

Much love...

Frank... said...

Thanks for revisiting Gillena...