Grey Squirrel - Haiku & Contemporary Haiga

Wednesday, 11 February 2015

navy-blue twilight

a slinking black cat

sticks close to the wall

Bill said...: I like to play around with the shape of haiku, and see what comes up. This has popped up as I'm reading yours

navy-blue twilight
slinking close to the wall
a black cat

I like the pictorial quality of your haiku and its echoes of Issa.; 11 February 2015 at 19:45
Adelaide said...: Hi Frank,
I like the description of twilight as navy-blue.

Adelaide; 13 February 2015 at 01:50
Frank... said...: Thanks for dropping by and commenting, Bill; and thanks for your alternative version...; 13 February 2015 at 14:29
Frank... said...: Thanks for dropping by and commenting, Adelaide...; 13 February 2015 at 14:29