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Wednesday 11 February 2015

navy-blue twilight
a slinking black cat
sticks close to the wall

4 comments:

Bill said...

I like to play around with the shape of haiku, and see what comes up. This has popped up as I'm reading yours

navy-blue twilight
slinking close to the wall
a black cat

I like the pictorial quality of your haiku and its echoes of Issa.

Adelaide said...

Hi Frank,
I like the description of twilight as navy-blue.

Adelaide

Frank... said...

Thanks for dropping by and commenting, Bill; and thanks for your alternative version...

Frank... said...

Thanks for dropping by and commenting, Adelaide...