__It seems this may be a discarded bag in our atmosphere Well, at least it's paper and can cycle itself back to nature; rot becomes positive. Well said Frank! :<) _mplastic bagclings to this tiny keeldagger board
my thought was immediately plastic or paper? plastic is so dangerous....besides that enjoyed very much Frank
the wind at worklifts a paper bagand quitsAdelaide
paper bag, sometimes I'm oblivious obviously say that three times real fast ;)
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Ah, yes, terrific haiku.I think many of us composed a flying shopping bag haiku in our time. There’s fewer around now, but they still appear, both bags and bag haiku. :-)above the shop roofa white plastic bag floatsthe starless nightAlan SummersPublications credits: Azami (Japan [early 1990s])*And a darker one...sultry eveningliquid from the take out bagruns near the victimAlan SummersPublications credits: World Haiku Review vol 2: Issue 3 (2002); Does Fish-God Know (Yet To Be Named Free Press 2012)
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__It seems this may be a discarded bag in our atmosphere Well, at least it's paper and can cycle itself back to nature; rot becomes positive. Well said Frank! :<) _m
plastic bag
clings to this tiny keel
dagger board
my thought was immediately plastic or paper? plastic is so dangerous....besides that enjoyed very much Frank
the wind at work
lifts a paper bag
and quits
Adelaide
paper bag, sometimes I'm oblivious obviously say that three times real fast ;)
Thank you Magyar, Lorraine & Adelaide for dropping by and commenting...
Ah, yes, terrific haiku.
I think many of us composed a flying shopping bag haiku in our time. There’s fewer around now, but they still appear, both bags and bag haiku. :-)
above the shop roof
a white plastic bag floats
the starless night
Alan Summers
Publications credits: Azami (Japan [early 1990s])
*
And a darker one...
sultry evening
liquid from the take out bag
runs near the victim
Alan Summers
Publications credits: World Haiku Review vol 2: Issue 3 (2002); Does Fish-God Know (Yet To Be Named Free Press 2012)
Thanks for dropping by and commenting & leaving your fine haiku, Alan...
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