My apologies for the delay in responding to your comments, things have been a bit up in the air of late. In answer to your question Bill, I put "snaking" on the 1st line to improve, IMHO the rhythm of the haiku. Thanks to everyone for your kind comments, they are appreciated.
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Snails trails, only you Frank, love this, always
I like it, Frank. Just curious: why is "snaking" in line 1 rather than line 2?
snail trails
a silvery map
on the sidewalk
Adelaide
__Such time without activity, creates concern within my senses; I hope all is well Frank_! _m
Dear All,
My apologies for the delay in responding to your comments, things have been a bit up in the air of late. In answer to your question Bill, I put "snaking" on the 1st line to improve, IMHO the rhythm of the haiku. Thanks to everyone for your kind comments, they are appreciated.
Best wishes, Frank...
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