Grey Squirrel - Haiku & Contemporary Haiga

Monday, 14 March 2016

hurtling train
a million sundrops
on the dark lake

Magyar said...: night train
wheels on tracks spark
murky bridge

__My imagination: the night train showers sparks, as its speeding wheels scream across the tracks. Nifty, Frank. _m; 16 March 2016 at 20:56
comrade harps said...: Very nice. I can see it. Beautiful.; 17 March 2016 at 12:47
Frank... said...: Thanks for dropping by & commenting & your fine haiku, Magyar...; 17 March 2016 at 15:10
Frank... said...: Thanks for dropping by & commenting, comrade harps...; 17 March 2016 at 15:11
Bill said...: I had to read line 2 twice. Can "sundrops" be one word? Very good in any case.; 17 March 2016 at 15:41
Frank... said...: Thanks for dropping by & commenting, Bill. Yes, sundrops does sound better...; 20 March 2016 at 12:42