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Monday 14 March 2016

hurtling train
a million sundrops
on the dark lake

6 comments:

Magyar said...

night train
wheels on tracks spark
murky bridge

__My imagination: the night train showers sparks, as its speeding wheels scream across the tracks. Nifty, Frank. _m

comrade harps said...

Very nice. I can see it. Beautiful.

Frank... said...

Thanks for dropping by & commenting & your fine haiku, Magyar...

Frank... said...

Thanks for dropping by & commenting, comrade harps...

Bill said...

I had to read line 2 twice. Can "sundrops" be one word? Very good in any case.

Frank... said...

Thanks for dropping by & commenting, Bill. Yes, sundrops does sound better...