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Saturday, 4 April 2009

a new week…
black-headed seagulls circle

a chill blue sky

4 comments:

Dalloway said...

"a chill blue sky"... a perfect line

actually, I may have shortened this haiku to something like:

a new week...
seagulls circle
a chill blue sky

ovely words, a great image

Frank Williams said...

Thanks Dalloway for your comments and suggestion for condensing my haiku. I'm going to adopt your shortened first line. In my opinion, the word black engenders a feeling of foreboding that most of us feel at the beginning of the workweek. Thanks once again...

Dalloway said...

ah! I thought I might have been missing something... I hope next Monday is easier for you. Dal

Lorraine said...

I can see you words, I like that, very much!