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Saturday 4 April 2009

a new week…
black-headed seagulls circle

a chill blue sky

4 comments:

Emma Dalloway said...

"a chill blue sky"... a perfect line

actually, I may have shortened this haiku to something like:

a new week...
seagulls circle
a chill blue sky

ovely words, a great image

Frank... said...

Thanks Dalloway for your comments and suggestion for condensing my haiku. I'm going to adopt your shortened first line. In my opinion, the word black engenders a feeling of foreboding that most of us feel at the beginning of the workweek. Thanks once again...

Emma Dalloway said...

ah! I thought I might have been missing something... I hope next Monday is easier for you. Dal

Lorraine said...

I can see you words, I like that, very much!