Oh Frank, how ingenious and totally striking, bravo for this astonishing duo...hey I rhymn lol
brilliant stuff Frank
Oh! that was unexpected, Frank :)brilliant, as always :)wishes, devika
ah, the things this one evokes... a fine haiga
Evolutionary - the leaf is alive in your set. Good one, as far as I can say, Frank.Best wishesRalf
The quick changes that come to mind; I can hear the leaves along the walkway and smell the fresh rain moving in. A fine one Frank.
this one appeals to many senses, paints a strong image, and tells a great story... you cant really ask for much more, can you?
the wet, the dry, I like how you did this.
Wonderful haiga Frank.Like Magyar I smell that rain and feel the crunching of leaves underfoot...
I really like 'threatening rain' and the sound of the haiku with crackles!AlanWith Words Online Haiku Competition.
Nice one - ominous, like the leaf is trying to speak.
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