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Thursday, 14 May 2009

song of the lark…
on the grass footpath

a snail’s mute world

7 comments:

Lorraine said...

I never thought of a snail as being in a magical land, there, you've opened my eyes...I love this Frank, bravo!!!

Paul Smith said...

Priceless Frank!

Devika said...

A very natural moment in nature,
fine one, Frank :)

wishes,
devika

Janice Thomson said...

I like how you include the delicateness too of both the snail and the grass. This is a wonderful haiku.

RBroeker said...

The scene is great, Frank. Have to think a while about the use of the word "mute".

Best wishes
Ralf

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

nice!

Alan Summers said...

Wonderful.

I love haiku about snails, and even if the lark is in the first line, it's the snail that touches me.

all my best,
Alan
With Words Online Haiku Competition.