I never thought of a snail as being in a magical land, there, you've opened my eyes...I love this Frank, bravo!!!
A very natural moment in nature, fine one, Frank :)wishes, devika
I like how you include the delicateness too of both the snail and the grass. This is a wonderful haiku.
The scene is great, Frank. Have to think a while about the use of the word "mute".Best wishesRalf
Wonderful.I love haiku about snails, and even if the lark is in the first line, it's the snail that touches me.all my best,AlanWith Words Online Haiku Competition.
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