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Monday, 1 June 2009

navy blue twilight…
rats on the compost

scatter as we pass

8 comments:

Lorraine said...

Oh wow doesn't just have an image it's also olfactory...a little shocker in the morning ;) I like that lol

RBroeker said...

A very tough one. Could be a scene on Elmstreet ;-) But when I think a little while "Ratatouille" comes in my mind - and I smile.

Best wishes
Ralf

Paul Smith said...

A strong haiku Frank. The word 'scatter' is so full of energy.

Devika said...

haha!
talk of rats and i can't help laughing,
Good one, Frank :)

wishes,
devika

John McDonald said...

navy blue twilight - just delightful

Janice Thomson said...

I like that 'navy blue twilight' also! Neat contrast here.

Bill said...

Striking, Frank. "navy" and "rats" together have me thinking of sinking ships.

jem said...

Great choice of the word 'scatter' - lighter and more innocent than rats are often portrayed as.