Oh wow doesn't just have an image it's also olfactory...a little shocker in the morning ;) I like that lol
A very tough one. Could be a scene on Elmstreet ;-) But when I think a little while "Ratatouille" comes in my mind - and I smile.Best wishesRalf
A strong haiku Frank. The word 'scatter' is so full of energy.
haha!talk of rats and i can't help laughing, Good one, Frank :)wishes, devika
navy blue twilight - just delightful
I like that 'navy blue twilight' also! Neat contrast here.
Striking, Frank. "navy" and "rats" together have me thinking of sinking ships.
Great choice of the word 'scatter' - lighter and more innocent than rats are often portrayed as.
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Oh wow doesn't just have an image it's also olfactory...a little shocker in the morning ;) I like that lol
A very tough one. Could be a scene on Elmstreet ;-) But when I think a little while "Ratatouille" comes in my mind - and I smile.
Best wishes
Ralf
A strong haiku Frank. The word 'scatter' is so full of energy.
haha!
talk of rats and i can't help laughing,
Good one, Frank :)
wishes,
devika
navy blue twilight - just delightful
I like that 'navy blue twilight' also! Neat contrast here.
Striking, Frank. "navy" and "rats" together have me thinking of sinking ships.
Great choice of the word 'scatter' - lighter and more innocent than rats are often portrayed as.
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