Grey Squirrel - Haiku & Contemporary Haiga

Thursday, 7 April 2011

census day—for a moment
three geese fly parallel
with our train

Lorraine said...: laughing at us lol i love this I'm chuckling; 7 April 2011 at 14:26
Anonymous said...: I like the fine irony. Count the geese for census if you want. It doesn't matter.
Best wishes
Rudi; 7 April 2011 at 21:30
Paul Smith said...: 'We're all in it together'... I love this Frank.; 8 April 2011 at 13:07
Carletta said...: Loved Rudi's comment.
Very nice as always Frank. :); 9 April 2011 at 05:27
Janice Thomson said...: What a splendid image with its sarcastic touch of humor. Excellent Frank!; 9 April 2011 at 17:37
Bill said...: Just a suggestion

census day –
three geese parallel
with our train

Haiku implies a moment, and fly is the default mode of geese. Good moment.; 11 April 2011 at 15:53
Frank... said...: Bill: thanks for your suggestion, which I give some thouyght too...; 11 April 2011 at 16:43