Grey Squirrel - Haiku & Contemporary Haiga

Saturday, 25 February 2012

low hum of traffic...

a woodpigeon coos

out of tune

Lorraine said...: Oh how imaginative, I'll take the pigeoh, wow; 26 February 2012 at 12:51
Frank... said...: Thanks, Lorraine...; 26 February 2012 at 15:05
Bill said...: They're all out of tune but the pigeon.; 26 February 2012 at 19:11
Frank... said...: Thanks, Bill...; 26 February 2012 at 19:20
Magyar said...: a cows moos
two doves comment
in rhyme

From one of my scribble books, I
considered this an aphorism and not haiku/senryu; it just seems to fit, though, with your good haiku. _m; 26 February 2012 at 22:38
Frank... said...: Thanks,Magyar and for your poem...; 26 February 2012 at 23:15
Carletta said...: I can't top what Bill said - his was perfect. :)
Have a wonderful day!; 27 February 2012 at 05:49
Frank... said...: Thanks, Carletta. Have a wonderful day yourself...; 27 February 2012 at 06:11
Adelaide said...: A good one.

Adelaide; 4 March 2012 at 14:47
Frank... said...: Thanks, Adelaide...; 4 March 2012 at 17:14