Grey Squirrel - Haiku & Contemporary Haiga

Tuesday, 26 June 2012

drone of an alarm—

a plastic bag glides past

on a lazy wind

Gillena Cox said...: nice resonance :)

much love...; 26 June 2012 at 14:25
Frank... said...: Thanks for stopping by Gillena...; 26 June 2012 at 14:54
Lorraine said...: ....a lazy wind, memories that soothe me, thank you Frank; 28 June 2012 at 13:08
Frank... said...: Thanks for stopping by Lorraine...; 28 June 2012 at 13:52
Adelaide said...: This and the clothes line haiku...both capture the moment very well.

Adelaide; 28 June 2012 at 14:23
Frank... said...: Thanks for stopping by Adelaide...; 28 June 2012 at 14:51
Bill said...: Did you think of trying this without line 3?

drone of an alarm . . .
a plastic bag
glides by

I think it works this way, too.; 28 June 2012 at 18:34
Frank... said...: Thanks for your input, Bill which I will give serious thought to. Welcome back...; 28 June 2012 at 19:14