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Tuesday 26 June 2012


drone of an alarm—
a plastic bag glides past
on a lazy wind

8 comments:

Gillena Cox said...

nice resonance :)


much love...

Frank... said...

Thanks for stopping by Gillena...

Lorraine said...

....a lazy wind, memories that soothe me, thank you Frank

Frank... said...

Thanks for stopping by Lorraine...

Adelaide said...

This and the clothes line haiku...both capture the moment very well.

Adelaide

Frank... said...

Thanks for stopping by Adelaide...

Bill said...

Did you think of trying this without line 3?

drone of an alarm . . .
a plastic bag
glides by

I think it works this way, too.

Frank... said...

Thanks for your input, Bill which I will give serious thought to. Welcome back...