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Monday, 26 May 2014

boyhood memory
the park’s drinking fountain
is falling apart

3 comments:

Lorraine Renaud said...

I'm with you there Frank ours most of ours have been destroyed, you want to get water buy it or go home, beautiful yet sad haiga or would it be a senryu ??? I can't get the form right you know when it's a comment also on society it would be a s.....

Lorraine Renaud said...

I thought I left a message, did I,ours are getting rusty and broken...yes i posted before

Frank... said...

Hi Lorraine, both your messages received okay. I would say that my post is a haiku; senyru tend to be a comment on human nature/weaknesses etc. Hope you have a good Tuesday!...