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Monday 26 May 2014

boyhood memory
the park’s drinking fountain
is falling apart

3 comments:

Out of Sight L said...

I'm with you there Frank ours most of ours have been destroyed, you want to get water buy it or go home, beautiful yet sad haiga or would it be a senryu ??? I can't get the form right you know when it's a comment also on society it would be a s.....

Out of Sight L said...

I thought I left a message, did I,ours are getting rusty and broken...yes i posted before

Frank... said...

Hi Lorraine, both your messages received okay. I would say that my post is a haiku; senyru tend to be a comment on human nature/weaknesses etc. Hope you have a good Tuesday!...