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Thursday, 8 May 2014

hot crowded bus...
I focus my mind
on a cool breeze

10 comments:

Lorraine Renaud said...

that should do crossed air is really refreshing unless of course people close the windows

Bill said...

Just playing with this

crowded bus
a cool breeze drifting through
my mind

A moment I can relate to.

Frank... said...

Thanks for dropping by and commenting, Lorraine...

Frank... said...

Thanks for dropping by and commenting, Bill...

Nick said...

An interesting piece of work (to me, in my current place and circumstances) - a life I left behind a long time ago (and don't miss). Thanks - I think - for reminding me of it.

Frank... said...

Thanks for dropping by and commenting, Nick...

Magyar said...

sweeter air
as this door opens
bus stop

Clever Frank. _m

Frank... said...

Thanks for dropping by and leaving your haiku...

Adelaide said...

rear of the bus
not enough room
for a paper fan

Adelaide

Frank... said...

Thanks for dropping by and leaving your haiku. Adelaide...